Questions 1-4 see Eoghain and Max's blog. Your questions here are much better. Should you consider working on your own on the evaluation as your questions 5,6 and 7 are much stronger?
Question 5 - some c and cs here that would benefit from going in question one. Some sense of appeal but you need to look at more.
Question 6 - serif section - avoid the honestly bit. State that egs used in garage band helped to create verisimilitude. What about technologies used in evaluation? This is generally a good answer. Well done.
Question 7 - check spelling of for and scene. Good range of egs. You have compared prelim to final construction really well. Read the question again. You also need to include what you learnt from prelim rather than just how prelim was worse than final product.
Look across all 7 questions. Have you used a strong range of ICT?
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