Audience/teacher feedback and improvements on first final product draft

Due to the feedback we received from our first final product, we changed the name of our film from 'Mr' Lynch' to 'Hidden' as some people felt that it read as more of a crime drama than a horror/thriller film, so we changed the focus of the title from being focused on the main character which could be wrongly interpreted as Mr Lynch being a detective, to 'Hidden' which makes the genre of the film easier to guess and gives the audience some idea of the story line.

Secondly, the audience also commented on a few lighting problems that they felt we had. For example, at some points the scenes were too dark and the audience couldn't quite make out what was going on, such as in one of the opening scenes where we see a shot of the man's feet walking towards his house. So, we re-shot some of them and replaced the scenes using Final Cut Pro.

Also, we received feedback on the fact that we needed a lot more titles during our film. However, after putting a few more in we have been told that we need to still put some more in so I will do this in the next lesson.